the hole in the pocket

i colour the The Senses yellow and her feelings blue

Purpose – entertai

WALT – choose/use words that make people want to read our writing

• • Use the senses to add more detail.

• Use an online thesaurus to help find great words.

“Sophie come with me”bloob the BFG”but  Sophie was  uneasy and Said no. but he got her and landed her in the  pocket it was smelly and smelt like dog pee eww  said the bfg  .the bfg ran a to  too go to Catch dreams he caught enough so he ran back and got Sophie and the BFG bloob her down. 

BFG Bella